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I think that this story definitely has potential, but the way it is structured could have been better. It jumped straight into the main character talking to their system without any background info which leaves me with confusion on what is happening.
I think that this story definitely has potential, but the way it is structured could have been better. It jumped straight into the main character talking to their system without any background info which leaves me with confusion on what is happening.